Writing

writing we did a Pigerell Once upon a time there lived three pigs and they were sisters. Now two of the pigs were extremely ugly and horrible to everyone except one pig and that was the Prince of Pig Ville and he was called Prince Charming and they were so in love with him, but the third sister was shy an hardly ever talked and was called Pigerella and she was the cleaner for the pigs castle the ugly sisters were really mean to Pigerlla and she was really in love with Prince Charming but nobody knew because she kept it a very deep a secret.

Then one day Pigerella heard that there was a Pig Ville ball coming soon and her sisters were going to the Pig Ville ball to try and get a dance with the Prince and Pigerella was kept in the castle to scrub the toilet and that was the job she hated the most while the ugly sisters went to the ball …

Then that night while Pigerella was siting there with a bucket of water on her knees scrubbing the horrendously smelly toilet wishing that she could go to the Pig Ville ball she caught a glimpse of a flash not very far away and then a Fairy came in to the toilet which scared her pork chops off. Pigerella said in a very frightened tone “Who - Who are you” then a very calm and peaceful voice answered back “I'm your Fairy God Mother” “And I’m going to help you get to the Pig Ville ball in time for the feast and the dance” “But how are you going to do that” protested Pigerella I have no fancy clothes or shoes and I'm not going like this and I’m surpossed to stay here and scrub the toilet” But then the Fairy God Mother bought out her wand and waved it at Pigerella and then flash Pigerella had all of a sudden got a pretty dress and glass shoes and then she heard some horses waiting to take here to the Pig Ville Ball.

While the horses were trotting to the Pig Ville Ball Pigerella saw Price Charming welcoming quests to the ball and then he looked at Pigerella and then she was a bit shy about going but she plucked up her courage and when the horses stopped she stepped out of the carriage and walked through the big doors and into the castle. She was very shy and scared so she sat down only to find the ugly step sisters talking to Rumpelstiltskin, so Pigerella grabbed a glass of punch and some chips and sat down …

But then the big clock rang signalling that it was time for the Pig Ville dance at 10 o clock and then Prince Charming walked down the red carpet in search for a date and then he saw Pigerella and asked her to dance and all Pigerella had to say was “Yes” so she spent the best 30 minutes of her life dancing with Prince Charming and then disaster struck.She went to get a drink and then all of sudden flash her dress and shoes had mysteriously disappeared and she was back in her dirty clothes that she was wore for cleaning the toilet and as fast as she could ran out of the castle and she ran all the way home with Prince Charming sitting down sadly with no one to dance with so he decided to find his true love.

The next morning he walked down to all the houses with no luck but there was one house left and that was Pigerella house, so he walked in and asked Pigerella’s mother to see if any of the sisters was his true love so he examined all three sisters and then he came to Pigerella and looked at her very carefully and then said “It’s you … you are my true love and you will come live with me in the castle for eternity. So they Pigerella and Prince Charming lived happily ever after. The End.

By Sam and Lachie.

This story was very well written and quite funny. There were a few spelling mistakes but mostly there were heaps of full stop mistakes. Altogether this was a very well written story and good to read. Well done Lachie and Sam. Liam He.

Good pictures. Good first, middle and end parts to the story also funny i like the “which scared her pork chops off” easy to understand as well Javier My story

media type="custom" key="8566972" I was the mystery writer and I chose ella group so heres hers.

ella and her groups story:

By Ella, Joseph and PJ.

Illusions It was Tuesday 22 of July, 1995.

I was so happy we were almost home. I looked out of the helicopter window beside me, seeing all the smoke and fire underneath the chopper, I new we had won.

As I sat in the helicopter, I realised I had a very sore back and cramp in my legs. All of a sudden, I heard the pilot yell “Mayday, Mayday, were going down”. The alert button next to me was flashing red, and knew it wasn’t good sign. The chopper was going out of control as it shook furiously. It seemed like an anchor was grabbing hold of the helicopter and jerking it towards the ground.

I woke up. I was only inhaling the smoke from the burning petrol, as I breathed heavily. I rolled onto my side seeing the wreckage falling apart. Beside me, I spotted my friend Simmons lying with his head against the sand. As I looked at his face I saw blood trickling from mouth, and that was when I knew he was dead. His pale white skin and his lifeless body brought tears to my eyes as I walked away from his limp corpse.

Everyone around me was dead apart from the pilot who I found moaning with a broken neck in the remains of the crash. I tried all I could to help him but as the flames grew bigger, I knew he wouldn’t stand a chance. I felt rotten about leaving him but I knew I had to get out of here. I ran as fast as I could away from the destroyed chopper, trying to forget what had just happened. The big explosion behind me made me trip over and land face first into the sand. I picked myself up and kept running.

The only thing I could see was the sand dunes all around me, Making me feel drowsy. “Oh man, how am I gonna get out of this one” I said out loud,but then in the distance something shiny caught my eye. As it got closer I began to see it more clearly. The greens and yellows were making a vibrant rainbow, then I began to think. A bird? Whats a bird doing all the way out here? The bird then dropped something on my head. It must have been the shiny object that I saw earlier. It was a spoon. My head was throbbing so hard I didn’t realise how strange it was for a bird to be flying with a spoon in it’s talons.

I was exhausted. The scorching hot sun brought pain to back as though I had just been shot. Luckily I had my backpack with me, but it carried less than I needed. It contained two bottles of water both half empty, a compass full of sand and various bolts just in case the chopper broke down, but I didn’t need them any more so I dropped them in the sand and kept going.

I saw various mirages as I trudged, but as I ran up to them, I found that they were just fragments of my imagination. The sun was getting to my head, and maybe that’s where the budgies came from.

“Oh no I’m gonna die out here with no water”, I complained to myself, but as I wiped the tears of my nose, I saw something else in the distance. This time I was convinced it was real and not an illusion. As I ran up to it, it was almost like a dream come true. A big pool of sparkling water filled my vision as I jumped in. I was happy to have the shade of the oasis trees, but even more cheerful about the water. I filled both my drink bottles up to the brim, but then felt a sudden dizziness that made me drop to knees. As i did I spotted these amazing looking mushrooms on a near by tree trunk. I reached out to grab them and then got an enormous fright. Something yelled “ Hey, Don’t you put your dirty hands on me”. I realised it was the mushrooms talking. “ What greatness. Talking mushrooms.”I said as I grabbed them and scoffed them down.

I decided to leave the oasis, and try and find some civilization. As I though I saw a building in the distance, I started to sprint towards it. While doing it, I tripped hard and smacked my head on a rock.

As my eyes began to open, all I could see was the blank walls around me. A man in completely white clothing strolled through the door. He peered down at me and said “ You have been through quite a lot so we are going to keep you here for a while.” “No!” I objected. “ There were birds and spoons and. and mushrooms...”I muttered. “ There there. You have been through quite a lot for one life time and I think you will need to stay here with us at the National Mental hospital.” Oh know. I think the illusions have taken over.

Benny and the walt: write short stories for competitions...... what the judges are looking for date thursday 22 march

ow! i just stubbed my toe “ha ha stupid benny don't you have eyes or something you are so stupid”.My Name is Benny as you can see i get bullied a lot there are heaps of mean people. i live in levin some people say levin is rated the most boring place in New zealand but i think something is going to change. Benny time for school okay mum almost there hurry the bus is about to leave oh darn-et benny you missed the bus again. oh common ill drive you to school thanks mum. “have a good day” “bye mum”. “Theres the boy what is so great about him i know he doesn’t look it but he knows things that witches Exist in this world. “now who knows what 9x9 is. jacob” 9x9 is 81 correct!. dam that should of been me. “now class lets see if the radio is going to tell our story I am down in city hall three old ladies who are deformed in some way are holding people hostage well thats all the news we have because I’m getting out of here. “well thats something you don't here ever day “sorry mr baker i have to go”wait where are you going! “some were” man can this day get any worse. undead worries rise “I spoke to soon”bending down and picking up a pipe.okay i just need to remember how to kill these things I read in a book some were.i got it! i need someone to distract them police officer come over here “kid what are you doing here” sorry no time to explain. Go over and wave your hands in the air “why am i doing this” “JUST DO IT!” and say loud noises “ok?” blah blah blah over here! okay get ready there coming okay. Now benny sticks the pipe into the worrier in it disappears into ablivyin. Okay now we need to get rid of those witches now some how without I need to get into that building without seeing me, hay an invisibility tablet over there i need to be quick, got it now i need to get to the top floor walking over to the elevator witches remember me err its you again how did you get up here but look what I have a torch what is that going to do nothing but when i turn it on ul see ha ha ha flash! ahhhhhhhh my eyes my eyes my ugly eyes common lets get out of here well thats done i can go home and go to sleep finally